Avatar Fanfiction: Toruk Makto. Chapter 1

Avatar Fanfiction (Movie)
Toruk Makto
Chapter 1
No copyright intended. James Cameron made the movie.
Summary: We all know the humans left, after the Navi had one. But what happened to the legendary 'Toruk Makto'. Would Jake ever need him again? And what does Toruk do in his free time?
   Okay, so this is my first attempt at actually writing a fanfiction. I've wrote some before but I didn't put much effort into it. Also I am not good in how would you say grammar rules, so please bear with me!
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Jake's P.O.V.
     It's hard letting a friend go. Even one that you haven't known for the longest time, but I had been through a lot with, and that's how it felt when I set Toruk free again. Yes, I don't need him anymore, but he was my partner in war. The war, I probably wouldn't have found the clan without him. I wouldn't have been able to help as much without him. But he deserves to be free, he is 'King of the Skies'.
          Yes, I still have Kikada (People think she is a he, but she is a she). Kikada's wonderful, and I love her. She's brillant and fast and well she can be sweet but she does have a temper.
    Nyteri, she now has a new Ikran, Adisa. Adisa is a golden Ikran with white patches and blue eyes. Nyteri loves her, but not as much as Seze, Nyteri had, had Seze for years and then lost her in battle. When she had to go get a new Ikran, she had gotten Adisa. Now don't me wrong, Adisa she's talented. She's beautiful, not to mention uniquely colored, plus she's a brillant hunter. But she's not Seze.
    Toruk, he is the mega Ikran I guess. He's extremley smart, fast, beautiful, a brillant hunter, and all around just King. He emits power wherever he goes. Kikada, shes a brillant Ikran and I love her. As much as I love her, I'm always gonna wonder what Toruk did after I had set him free.
Authors note: Sorry this was short, I guess it's kinda like the introductory chapter. Idk. But I wasn't sure if Jake's Ikran was a boy or girl, so I made it a girl. :)